Master Baker and Miss potts had struggled through the jungle to get to the other side of their holliday Island, which they had both felt the urge and pull to visit and after their seperate dreams - followed their senses across the Island.
Until they reached the other side and the ocean
Across the bay they see a cave, as soon as they saw it, they felt the pull on them even more so, they just had to get accross somehow, for they knew the answer was in that cave.
As they sat talking through their escapade, they suddenly realised that the tide was going out and a pathway appeared - so they started walking across to the cave - not knowing what to expect.
You are now DOOMED --- when suddenly a loud rattle and creaking noise - they turned around - and found bars had come down trapping them in the cave----The voice of the develish Imp said - you are mine now
Until they reached the other side and the ocean
Across the bay they see a cave, as soon as they saw it, they felt the pull on them even more so, they just had to get accross somehow, for they knew the answer was in that cave.
As they sat talking through their escapade, they suddenly realised that the tide was going out and a pathway appeared - so they started walking across to the cave - not knowing what to expect.They finally got to the cave - it was dark and damp inside - with an awful smell of death......They slowly walked inside - when suddenly a erie shrill cackle laugh hit their ears and the words saying ----
You are now DOOMED --- when suddenly a loud rattle and creaking noise - they turned around - and found bars had come down trapping them in the cave----The voice of the develish Imp said - you are mine now
the tide will come in - then I shall reclaim your bodies - just like I did to your ancesters you saw in your dreams ---------
To be continued.
To be continued.
10 comments:
Gee!
May I breath now?
What a story! I'm scared and very concerned about Master Baker and Miss Potts!
Please Imac...You must help them!
I want to see the sequences...
Beautiful pictures!I would like to visit there...hummmm....
However I want to pull that part of the "cage"!
God bless you
Léia
Wow. Interesting and unexpected. And beautiful photos, too. I hope they're not really trapped!
Great photos and your pulling us along like a serial nove.
What a suspense ! I am breathless ! (not for too long otherwise I become blue and that doesn't suit me very well)
The pictures are beautiful ! what a landscape !
What, no mermaid?!
Yikes... I was on the edge of my seat with this story. Oh dear, what will ever happen to Master Baker and Miss Potts?!!?
How can there be such evil in the midst of the beauty of this island? How are Master Baker and Miss Potts going to escape? Are you going to make us wait long for the next episode? This is just like the movie serials I saw as a kid!
Oh no, what happens next? I can hardley wait! Please don't leave us in suspense for too long, I beg of you :)
Oh no! Now I need to see the finale.
OH no! Not the same fate as the ancestors in their dreams. Yikes!
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